BOOK! Roasted’s Reviews > Daggermouth > Status Update

One dies for sure

Still chillin with the writing. The caliber is good. It's still giving expertly rendered Wattpad a lil but not mad about it. The only thing I'm tweaking over is how generic the Big Bad is. I am very confused why he's so evil. It's so one dimensional and uncreative. Why doesn't Greyson just kill him? If he's the heir, won't he just become the president and then he can start fixing everything without

I'm assuming/ hoping this is one of those books where the Why? of it all comes later. Because right now this is giving 'Contracted Marriage to the Evil Mob Boss's Son!' of Wattpad/ self publish droves, just with way better than usual writing for that chaff. Not bad so far!