Pepi’s Reviews > Crown of Light and Shadows > Status Update
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is 20% done
I am enjoying it so far, but I have some issues with the writing style which are impairing the fun reading experience
The setting is a fantasy fae land with magical animals but the author uses Earth animals for comparison (like a hippo sat on my chest). Also please, "rump" is used for horses, humans and humanoid fae have "asses" or
"bottoms" or anything else really. The same goes for the word "maw".
— Sep 04, 2026 01:15AM
The setting is a fantasy fae land with magical animals but the author uses Earth animals for comparison (like a hippo sat on my chest). Also please, "rump" is used for horses, humans and humanoid fae have "asses" or
"bottoms" or anything else really. The same goes for the word "maw".
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