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Paul Warren
is 39% done
Sooo much time repeating the “this needs to happen” and describing every little detail but very little plot or world building is happening that isn’t telling than showing. Other than the coronation and body doubles
— Sep 06, 2026 05:59AM
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Paul Warren
is 70% done
Can any character besides Shimin get a description of something unique about them other than their names? Hair color, height? Clothing style?
— Sep 15, 2026 11:05AM
Paul Warren
is 68% done
The level of violence and coercion in the first months, as well as dividing of the populace to different centers of power would make GRRM orb the French Revolution blush!
If it doesn’t all crash at the end I’m going to riot myself
— Sep 15, 2026 07:03AM
If it doesn’t all crash at the end I’m going to riot myself
Paul Warren
is 67% done
“Through my lessons with Wan’er, I’ve learned that there are two different types of freedom. Negative freedom is the absence of external interference against doing something, while positive freedom is having the resources to actually do it. Removing the ban on girls going to school doesn’t make a meaningful difference to a mountain peasant with no easy way of getting to one.”
— Sep 14, 2026 05:14PM
Paul Warren
is 66% done
“Blurry figures pass in slow motion around us on this street spun from his memories. Bittersweet sentiment flows freely from him like blood from an open wound, so tender that, for once, I don’t doubt his sincerity. Not when it comes to this, the mission he values above all else.“
— Sep 14, 2026 09:01AM
Paul Warren
is 56% done
Omg, so they can’t meet and she gets special shots. They still can’t meet. The shots make her sick, and now those are gone and no other thing has changed?!
— Sep 11, 2026 08:34AM
Paul Warren
is 53% done
We have no relationship to Yimin, I forget why I should care.
This whole structure is really janky
— Sep 10, 2026 07:11PM
This whole structure is really janky
Paul Warren
is 52% done
First female pilots should have happened in the first third, not endless political theory.
— Sep 10, 2026 09:01AM
Paul Warren
is 50% done
For real though, 15 years of French revolution and Maos great revolution compressed into a few weeks
— Sep 09, 2026 11:43AM

