AJA’s Reviews > The Dervish House > Status Update

I guess I don’t mind the 6 viewpoints but I would have a separate chapter for each and tell the whole story back to front for each person. That way I don’t lose the thread of what’s happening. I barely followed ayse adventure looking for the mellified man and it was the second most interesting plot!

Dang this just ain’t hanging together. I guess there is still a chance for a stunning ending but Deffo dragging rn.

Darn starting to lose the thread of one or two of the story lines…

I cant believe how well he is juggling 6 different povs and all are interesting

There is so much going on in this book!

Very layered and intricate. I’m enjoying this.

All right! This is gonna be good.