AJA’s Reviews > The Dervish House > Status Update

I guess I don’t mind the 6 viewpoints but I would have a separate chapter for each and tell the whole story back to front for each person. That way I don’t lose the thread of what’s happening. I barely followed ayse adventure looking for the mellified man and it was the second most interesting plot!

Dang this just ain’t hanging together. I guess there is still a chance for a stunning ending but Deffo dragging rn.

Darn starting to lose the thread of one or two of the story lines…

There is so much going on in this book!

Very layered and intricate. I’m enjoying this.

All right! This is gonna be good.

A lot of characters introduced all at once but that’s ok. The story is interesting so far!