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Sep 08, 2026 09:14AM
Heretic (Broken Gods, #0)

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Joshua Dharmawan
Joshua Dharmawan is on page 91 of 163
Something feels off with this book’s structure. The plot seemed a little all over the place with story beats feeling meaningless.

The prose is also making it very difficult to immerse myself. Varre feels like an empty shell of a character.

Also, the similarity of the world with ASOAIF is uncanny. It makes it difficult to separate this world with Essos.
Sep 09, 2026 12:24PM
Heretic (Broken Gods, #0)


Joshua Dharmawan
Joshua Dharmawan is on page 16 of 163
The prose reminded me a lot of how GRRM writes, often distancing away from the MC. Finding it a little difficult to anchor myself in the story because I don’t know anything abour Varre.
Sep 06, 2026 10:54AM
Heretic (Broken Gods, #0)


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