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NONE OF THAT TWIST MADE SENSE!!!!! NONE OF THAT TWIST MADE SENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NONE OF IT MADE SENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU JUST RANDOMLY BRING BACK A CHARACTER WHO WAS SUPPOSEDLY DEAD AND WE BARELY GET ANY INTERACTION WITH HIM AND IT’S LIKE OHHHH ACTUALLY HE’S EVIL????????????????????

this book is pissing me off. i thought i would maybe like this ending and i do not

why arent we shooting him

what do you mean he stifled moan when passing by her bc he smelt her scent…. bro how are u getting horny when she was literally just beaten wtf is going om

this logic makes no sense… his father legit said that he ordered the attack and that his brother was using an alias… ofc she didn’t know it was him. “she lied” bitch no she did not, she truly did not know it was ur brother. all of u wear masks, why would she recognize him without his mask on. AND she was told he was betraying the resistance? make his anger make sense.

1: like a 10-min-long sex scene is crazy…
2: i can’t deal with how sex scenes are written now… the dominant man thing always freaks me out like don’t talk to me like that 😭. is that what i’m supposed to want

there is something wrong with these two

this sex scene is making me cringe a bit 😭😭😭😭