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Critical Sandwich
is 50% done
I wish the other Dowager's ladies would be described better. Instead, all we get is mention that there're nicer ladies than Elisabeth, and everything else is just random names of them talking as a filler, but they're not important. We don't know anything about them (except filler 'looking beautiful in a dress before a ball"), there're no real friendships to read about, we don't even know how these girls look
— Sep 09, 2026 03:34AM
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Critical Sandwich
is 60% done
a big part of my continuing with this despite its early problems was the lmao-and-ijbol potential (also my reading slump and my wish to just FINISH fantasy books)
as of right now, I actually respect some things the author is doing. It could've been over at 50% with the 'breakup' and this could've been the start of the second book, but the author is giving us more plot in the second half of the book instead
— Sep 10, 2026 04:39AM
as of right now, I actually respect some things the author is doing. It could've been over at 50% with the 'breakup' and this could've been the start of the second book, but the author is giving us more plot in the second half of the book instead
Critical Sandwich
is on page 40 of 405
"Most of these men after me are only interested in staring at firm boobs and round ass"
that's where my inner Regina George wakes up screaming "SO YOU AGREE? YOU THINK YOU'RE REALLY PRETTY?"
honestly, a lot of the novel so far has been me ijbol-ing and lmao-ing
— Sep 03, 2026 11:54PM
that's where my inner Regina George wakes up screaming "SO YOU AGREE? YOU THINK YOU'RE REALLY PRETTY?"
honestly, a lot of the novel so far has been me ijbol-ing and lmao-ing
Critical Sandwich
is on page 5 of 405
side-eyeing a few expressions already, and rolling my eyes at "i'm a smolbean, the only person shorter than me is a boy (child)"
— Sep 03, 2026 12:27PM