Grace’s Reviews > From Blood and Ash (Part 1 of 2) [Dramatized Adaptation] > Status Update

*sigh* Editors.... I'm begging you... do your job... there is SO much "telling" and next to no "showing". Show, don't TELL me every minute detail of a bland ass scene. It's like- she stood, she walked, she opened the door, she went in the door, she walked more, she bent down, she picked up the petal, she smelled the petal...... TOO MANY WORDS FOR A POINTLESS ACTION