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mudslug
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i’m having so much trouble understanding why i like this book. the writing is like. it’s not bad but it’s also not great. it leaves a little to be desired and the pacing is horrendous. in 200 pages we have gone from a poor port town, to losing family in the war, to competing in three sewing trials, to becoming imperial tailor, to travelling through the country & being stuck in the desert. it’s good but wow
— Sep 10, 2026 02:48PM
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mudslug
is on page 67 of 392
“there, behind a magnolia tree, was the emperor!” sometimes you can tell a story was written by a chinese person bc they write shit like this. just an exclamation directed straight at the reader. it happens in chinese cinderella a lot and my mother does it a lot too. i don’t rly notice it in other books. it really takes u out of the story i wish i could study why
— Sep 08, 2026 11:00AM
mudslug
is on page 67 of 392
“Something clicked in my mind, and I recognized the strange way Ammi was acting. She was flirting with me!” finally some ace representation
— Sep 08, 2026 10:52AM