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Like this is what I mean "Zane stopped into the bathroom to straighten his tie and check to make sure his close-cropped brown hair lay down neatly. The suit he wore was sharply tailored to his 6’5” frame, but it didn’t hide the bulky muscles that moved under the fabric. His was not a body you’d expect to see riding a desk, a fact he was reminded of daily looking at the slightly pudgy agents who worked around him."
— Sep 12, 2026 08:03PM
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Finally cracking this one open after letting it sit on my list. Not the best first impression...the main characters describing themselves for easy characterization is annoying and yanks me out the story. Who plausibly, internally, describes themselves by their height to the inch and says "he usually carried his frame like a large cat, lithe and easy." It's third person close perspective btw
— Sep 12, 2026 08:00PM