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Story 2 - The chaser
I thought this was really trash to be honest . The perspective of the main character is boring and monotonous In the bad way. Very ridiculous for a pretty grounded story. Even the pig metaphor is goofy af. Trash . I would stop reading but the next one is the titular story so whatever. Whatever
— Sep 15, 2026 07:12AM
I thought this was really trash to be honest . The perspective of the main character is boring and monotonous In the bad way. Very ridiculous for a pretty grounded story. Even the pig metaphor is goofy af. Trash . I would stop reading but the next one is the titular story so whatever. Whatever
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the first story - Infect your friends and loved ones. What initially i thought was quite an interesting concept became unspectacular. It's sort of hard to sell the characters and do a whole world building thing in 50 pages . the brief introspective on the relationship pre apocalypse was most interesting. Apparently this short story was one of the author's first published works . I won't hold it against you
— Aug 25, 2026 06:20PM