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Liza
is 15% done
So far, the story feels very formulaic but I’m hoping that despite that, it turns out to be executed well
— Sep 15, 2026 07:03PM
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Liza
is 66% done
The security in this palace is top notch. Really. Diem runs out of the King’s chambers at full speed and Luther thinks for himself “hmm, she must have actually really needed her satchel and she certainly did not have any evil intent, right?”
Also the prose is so wacky in some places
— Sep 21, 2026 12:42PM
Also the prose is so wacky in some places
Liza
is 35% done
When does the fun start? 🥱 If you’re gonna make your book formulaic, better make it fun at least
— Sep 17, 2026 04:45PM