Victoria’s Reviews > The Hidden Falling > Status Update

This is my second go at this book, because I know there's a big betrayal from the MMC. I made it 11% last time and I'm 8 pages in now. There is just so much TELLING. It is like the FMC is writing about her day in a diary and leaving no thought out. There is no nuance, so far I am just being informed of every little detail like it's my first day on the planet and not in a fun way.