Heather’s Reviews > Go as a River > Status Update

Part 4 was good. The part where we get the other side of the story. Then it went back to the original and I quickly lost interest. I’m sure it’ll be good in the end. We’ll see! (Or hear, as it were)

Driving to the hospital to keep Mom company during Dad’s gallbladder surgery and then home.
At least stuff is happening, which has killed some of the flowery language, thank goodness!!

He took his last pneumonic breath.
Really?!

Hey, some stuff started happening again.

Ugh!!!!!!! I literally skipped through 5 minutes and didn’t miss ANYTHING! Then there was a gross scene I didn’t need the details of. If I had the physical copy I’d throw it across the room!

Ugh!!! It’s like the Dutch House all over again!!
“Taut balloons of my lungs”?! WTC is that?!
Not every noun has to have one or two adjectives with it! There’s no damn story! It’s just a rambling of things like how raindrops looked, what lightning looks like, what birds are doing. Holy hell! I was literally yelling at the author in my car and finally just turned it off!!

Improving

Eh