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Jack Goff
Jack Goff is 40% done
I couldn't figure out what was bothering me about this book until I read some of the other reviews. Performative. That's what bothers me. The main characters interrupting the plot to be like "You're not being feminist right now." or something similar is just grating. If your characters actually believe these things, they shouldn't have to shout out they do every two minutes.
19 hours, 13 min ago
Nest of Tongues

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This book is on very thin ice.
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