Sarah’s Reviews > A Dawn of Onyx > Status Update
Sarah
is 73% done
I don’t love this FMC or the MMC. She constantly contradicts herself and he’s a little.. bland? They both come across as very very young and childish and it’s very very frustrating.
Also there’s been a few things that were said in the beginning of the book about the FMCs back story that completely changed by now :/
— Sep 18, 2026 08:50AM
Also there’s been a few things that were said in the beginning of the book about the FMCs back story that completely changed by now :/
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