Shay’s Reviews > Burn of the Everflame > Status Update

I was hoping so much more from this book. The only good writing occurs during some death scenes. She also like ruined this one character by amplifying his personality to an unnatural amount. I have so much to say and I am so disappointed bc I loved the series up until now

My favorite thing in this book is the war scenes. It’s like I’m finally reading something real in the book when those happen. •_• like I cannot stand the miscommunication happening.

You have got to be joking. No chapter longer than 10 pages, somehow someway everyone is in love?? THERE IS NO COHESIVENESS TO THE BOOK. one moment yall are at a ball you didn’t even attend and I don’t get the details of but the next your on a completely different part of the continent and I don’t get to read about the journey and I’m supposed to just accept your there????

I think my biggest critique of diem is the fact she just throws around money. Girl you cannot offer million of dollars to every single person that is not how a good economy functions. And I know it’s just a tactic to earn support but like imagine they actually take her up on it

This is what life is about