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hilolllie
is 82% done
spoiler???? kinda? not really that important anyway
But can an SUV actually explode from a single bullet at the gas tank???? It sounds not quite realistic. I’m not a professional or anything, but let’s be real.. It seems highly unlikely.
— 4 hours, 26 min ago
But can an SUV actually explode from a single bullet at the gas tank???? It sounds not quite realistic. I’m not a professional or anything, but let’s be real.. It seems highly unlikely.
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hilolllie
is 78% done
I can’t wait to be done with this one. And I’m not trusting dark romance recommendations EVER AGAIN
— 5 hours, 41 min ago
hilolllie
is 37% done
“for some reason”
“something in his eyes”
“some kind of …”
“odd sensation/feeling”
“couldn’t put her finger on…”
are we getting ANY reasons? ANY real descriptions but the blue eyes and whiskey voice? She don’t know anything, she doesn’t analyse anything, doesn’t think, she doesn’t have explanations for ANYTHING around her. God, it’s so bad. The same things we get.
— Sep 13, 2026 06:56AM
“something in his eyes”
“some kind of …”
“odd sensation/feeling”
“couldn’t put her finger on…”
are we getting ANY reasons? ANY real descriptions but the blue eyes and whiskey voice? She don’t know anything, she doesn’t analyse anything, doesn’t think, she doesn’t have explanations for ANYTHING around her. God, it’s so bad. The same things we get.
hilolllie
is 35% done
“eyes lacking their normal hateful vibes”
no, just no. girl, why are we using tiktok language? hateful vibes? seriously?
— Sep 13, 2026 06:29AM
no, just no. girl, why are we using tiktok language? hateful vibes? seriously?
hilolllie
is 32% done
boring
idea could be fine, but it’s so poorly executed. Characters have no dimension, they are not morally grey or unlikeable,no, fmc is irrational despite her constantly repeating how genius she is. Mmc? he doesn’t do anything but stare with his blue eyes and be intense and intimidating and have sexy muscles. That’s all they are. No real motivation. No logic. The book is simply bland.
— Sep 13, 2026 03:41AM
idea could be fine, but it’s so poorly executed. Characters have no dimension, they are not morally grey or unlikeable,no, fmc is irrational despite her constantly repeating how genius she is. Mmc? he doesn’t do anything but stare with his blue eyes and be intense and intimidating and have sexy muscles. That’s all they are. No real motivation. No logic. The book is simply bland.
hilolllie
is 26% done
the amount of “heart punding” is clearly hinting she has to see a cardiologist as soon as possible.
I’m so sick of reading the same hundred words the author uses and rotates not even changing the combinations of them. It’s painful to go through the pages. I cannot possibly be immersed in the story when I only see shit about her breath hitching, heart pounding and eyes staring
— Sep 13, 2026 02:45AM
I’m so sick of reading the same hundred words the author uses and rotates not even changing the combinations of them. It’s painful to go through the pages. I cannot possibly be immersed in the story when I only see shit about her breath hitching, heart pounding and eyes staring
hilolllie
is 26% done
it’s not even funny how predictable it is. A boring kind of predictable.
I’m finishing this out of spite now, but God knows how much I want to dnf this masterpiece
— Sep 12, 2026 12:25PM
I’m finishing this out of spite now, but God knows how much I want to dnf this masterpiece