Tamsyn’s Reviews > Crossing the Line > Status Update
Tamsyn
is 53% done
Impressions so far:
Very insta-love, little foundation for attraction beyond the physical. There's a lot of smiling.
The writing isn't horrible, but there are some considerable errors and repetitive lines as if someone took out some lines or added new ones without checking to see if it fits or makes any sense whatsoever.
The characters, Sadie and Hudson, are thus far very one dimensional. Hockey makes up every inter
— Sep 22, 2026 04:53AM
Very insta-love, little foundation for attraction beyond the physical. There's a lot of smiling.
The writing isn't horrible, but there are some considerable errors and repetitive lines as if someone took out some lines or added new ones without checking to see if it fits or makes any sense whatsoever.
The characters, Sadie and Hudson, are thus far very one dimensional. Hockey makes up every inter
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