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If You Could See the Sun

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Jack Don
Jack Don is 72% done
This turning into a kidnap mission is crazy
— 16 hours, 36 min ago
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 60% done
One mission she never turns invisible. The guy wants to be a date anyway he tells her not to worry about that. He makes it a date they leave she never in night. She has to tell him she can go through the plane or with the job. She feel bad about it cause she was a failure, but I feel the guy feels good about it bc he feels like they were on a date
— Sep 21, 2026 07:55PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 60% done
She didn’t greedy about the money
First you need enough money in school as she then that she saying she needs enough money for college. She’s like if I just keep doing a job I’ll keep getting money and Shes sacrifice complete and her focus on her schoolwork.
— Sep 21, 2026 07:54PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 43% done
He REALLY likes her, and now bc she’s stressed she’s taking it out on him and he’s just trying to be helpful and patient
— Sep 21, 2026 03:25PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 40% done
This is fun and in the gaps I’ve been looking forward to getting back to the story
- the mmc is funny and cute
- like he wants to help her
- When the guy asked why he hanging around and he said option one option too is that you like me that you’re right I do like you funny
- he wants compliment from her. She wants to impress her.
- she doesn’t hate her and he thought it was fun competition between them
— Sep 21, 2026 03:03PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 38% done
Alice sent a guys video of him being drunk to a teacher bc he threaten to send a different girls nudes to a group of his friends
— Sep 21, 2026 12:30PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 38% done
I think the main characters last name is sun and she’s invisible so the title is about her
— Sep 21, 2026 12:30PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 38% done
She goes in and out of being invisible
— Sep 21, 2026 12:29PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 24% done
— Sep 20, 2026 09:09PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 10% done
The narration sounds similar to the narrative who read this book my save your life or the story might save your life. It’s not because I checked, but it sounds like her.
— Sep 20, 2026 08:02PM
If You Could See the Sun


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