simone’s Reviews > Switzy > Status Update

I don't rly like this style of writing it's so choppy and so trying to be poetry. IG prose poetry. I can never get into it and inmerse because Cline keeps breaking off. It's like may we feed the king but worse because may we feed the king would actually run through an entire chapter even if it's a short chapter. meanwhile this one has 1 paragraph scenes . Laziness I tell you. As a writer I know it's laziness