Nick’s Reviews > The Golden Helix > Status Update
Nick
is on page 228 of 335
Overall enjoyed The Ultimate Egoist, but the dialogue wasn't very good, and there wasn't much of a plot...but the ending was fun. The dialogue thing is that it just feels weird and unnatural at times. Not sure if it's just that some of it is old-timey language or if the dialogue is just written poorly.
— Sep 23, 2026 09:14PM
Like flag
Nick’s Previous Updates
Nick
is on page 182 of 335
Making my way through "And My Fear is Great", and this story is intriguing to me, but I'm also having a difficult time with some of the dialogue being a little awkward. Particularly the exchange between Don and Joyce the first time they actually meet and talk...and also just how quickly things go from there. I don't know.
— Sep 17, 2026 08:03PM
Nick
is on page 137 of 335
I thought The Clinic was okay. Kind of a cool ending.
— Sep 16, 2026 07:26PM