Jamie Dawes’s Reviews > The Fractured Dark > Status Update
Jamie Dawes
is 76% done
Chapters 47-51:
The dilemmas are still coming think and fast, but the book is losing sight of the main story.
Also Tarquin is sooo far in love with her, I can see this ending bad…
— Sep 25, 2026 03:22AM
The dilemmas are still coming think and fast, but the book is losing sight of the main story.
Also Tarquin is sooo far in love with her, I can see this ending bad…
Like flag
Jamie’s Previous Updates
Jamie Dawes
is 54% done
Chapters 17-36:
Wow Acaelus is actually a psycho. And maybe it’s not really all his doing, but I’m still going to pin it on him.
Story has plateaued for the first time since the beginning of book 1. Im only slightly disappointed, but I think that’s only because it’s been so much more constant than most books that the first time we start the inevitable loop of slow story progression of story it feels rough.
— Sep 21, 2026 04:42AM
Wow Acaelus is actually a psycho. And maybe it’s not really all his doing, but I’m still going to pin it on him.
Story has plateaued for the first time since the beginning of book 1. Im only slightly disappointed, but I think that’s only because it’s been so much more constant than most books that the first time we start the inevitable loop of slow story progression of story it feels rough.
Jamie Dawes
is 29% done
Chapters 1-16:
Book isn’t going in the direction I thought it was, but then again the direction I had projected was really boring so I’m very glad.
Our “new” important character is an absolute dickhead, but he is increasingly climbing my tier list. Very essential, and I’m sure there is something very important we don’t know yet.
On a more important note, this book has me just as hooked as the last.
— Sep 15, 2026 11:12PM
Book isn’t going in the direction I thought it was, but then again the direction I had projected was really boring so I’m very glad.
Our “new” important character is an absolute dickhead, but he is increasingly climbing my tier list. Very essential, and I’m sure there is something very important we don’t know yet.
On a more important note, this book has me just as hooked as the last.