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“Floppy’s in a police car, that’s so random. At least that means he’s safe, is he safer than we are Aunt Eliza?” Is this an 11 year old or 5 year old?
— Sep 25, 2026 05:46PM
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Again, is this an 11 year old or 5 year old? Does the author not know how to write preteens? Was Piper originally supposed to be 5 but she was aged up and everyone just forgot about the dialogue where she talks and acts like a toddler?
— Sep 27, 2026 09:08PM
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“And I had decided she didn’t know the word for safe” I would hope that a preteen knows what a safe is and has seen one
— Sep 26, 2026 12:47AM
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Last few paragraphs of chapter 30 and the top of chapter 31 feel especially egregious to me with writing Piper like she’s 5
— Sep 26, 2026 12:44AM
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Has the author met an 11 year old? Piper reads like she’s 2
Why would you not call the police and ask for a welfare check?
— Sep 25, 2026 05:35PM
Why would you not call the police and ask for a welfare check?