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is 98% done
Did he just put his raw chicken finger to her mouth. Oh hell no
— Sep 26, 2026 10:14AM
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is 62% done
I keep almost coming around to liking this book and then something happens that makes me remember i do Not
— Sep 25, 2026 02:14PM
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is 35% done
Just realized one of my major issues with the prose is the overuse of proper nouns. Elias did this / dialog / elias did that - all in one three sentence paragraph. Too much. It worsens the stilted feel the prose already suffers from
— Sep 25, 2026 07:50AM