Phoebe’s Reviews > Orbital > Status Update

Not sure if the text is just dreadfully dull or too challenging for me but it's taking every ounce of my already-limited-focus to keep going.

why is this boring as hell?

hmm this writing style is so meticulous and wordy… it’ll take a bit to get used to it. i think what’s bothering me right now, is the lack of commas.