Catherine’s Reviews > All-Star and the Amateur > Status Update

I don't understand why I need to know where every main and side character in this book sleeps at night and the exact ingredients in their first and second breakfasts, while the characters have only talked off page for the last 10 pages. There is ZERO spark between the MMCs, and the writing is robotic. Where is the cute banter? I am struggling to find the will to continue...