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There is alot wrong here (modern vernacular, out of place vocabulary, and grammatical errors to name a few) but the story is an interesting premise. The tropes are big neon standouts and the chemistry of the MCs is weak and the FMC is so vapid... I will go another chapter and decide. Definitely not buying the SE.
— Sep 28, 2026 01:11AM
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