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the dialogue is funny and there are certainly some entertaining characters, but the narrative writing is so.. janky? theres no flow or explanation, characters just wind up in certain places without much explanation. the flow of scenes and which perspective is being followed feels like how Quantum of Solace movie was edited in book form
— Sep 28, 2026 07:17AM
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