Amber’s Reviews > A Vow in Vengeance > Status Update

Oh right, the bounty...thanks for the reminder...I guess.

Yep, was right. That scene could have been done soooo much better or just skipped entirely. There was a myriad of ways to indicate that two of them were conspiring against the immortals without any of the rest of that that seemed way out of place for the Wraith.

It's too bad I didn't read page 200 before the previous update. This should be a study session, she is behind and she's doing drinking games? This is supposed to be a bit more of a calculated character and she's not showing that at all here. This scene is going to be atrocious without me even finishing it.

This reads very YA, which is an issue. I wish there was a bit more focused on the world building than perhaps some of the character interaction. This whole thing with Morgan should have been edited out. And Wynter, this already has enough going on with the subplots, we didn't need a poorly substantiated love triangle on top of it.