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rhys
rhys is 10% done
I’ve only read dltfi and this book is already just as nauseating with its forced prose. this is just the same character as the last time — a self hating teenage boy who feels trapped by circumstance and family, wanting for something to give, thinking love is a cure all. something or other. and that’s fine or whatever if you’re into that but his characters are always feeling suffocated by something and this +
— Oct 04, 2026 04:30PM
Scorpion Deep

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rhys
rhys is 85% done
Plot twist deadass ended up being don’t let the forest in ocean themed addition oh my god they cannot keep getting away with this
— Oct 05, 2026 01:55PM
Scorpion Deep


rhys
rhys is 52% done
Conceptually more interesting than DLTFI but this is just as plagued by forced poetic prose & nauseatingly repetitive dialogue on how the MC hates himself and he feels different than all his friends and he’s choking or suffocating on something. Get an inhaler
— Oct 04, 2026 10:09PM
Scorpion Deep


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rhys time it’s saltwater and brine and not vines and flowers or whatever tumblr shit. i just really wish cg drews would do something new and innovative with their characters instead of the same tumblr token sad boy of the month for 26 year olds still clinging to the YA genre. like there is potential here for SOMETHING but it just falls so flat because i feel so irked by being stuck in this characters head.


rhys also can you please write an asexual that doesn’t hate their friends for wanting sex


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