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Avah
is 73% done
it truly does feel like this book is the product of the author taking his first ever beginner creative writing course at the local community college. no tea no shade no pink lemonade directed at the beautiful institution of community colleges, of course.
— Oct 06, 2026 07:07PM
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Avah
is 80% done
the concept of the house having rules that are impossible to follow, and when you break them your life incurs instant negative karma unless you do more impossible side quests IS GOOD…….. but it’s so poorly executed
— Oct 06, 2026 10:05PM
Avah
is 55% done
you can't publish a book in a post GenAI world and expect me not to raise an eyebrow at your credibility if you include sentences that do that "It was [X]. No, not [X]. It was [Y]." like....... if you're gonna be a shitty writer at least make it sound human for the love of god.
— Oct 06, 2026 05:29PM
Avah
is on page 123 of 295
the writing has somehow devolved since his first book
— Sep 23, 2026 09:51AM