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Maddy
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Story continues to be interesting, while writing continues to be not great.
How many times do you have to remind readers that a character is “my stepmom, Janice.” Not every time she’s mentioned, that’s for sure. We get it.
— Oct 08, 2026 09:24AM
How many times do you have to remind readers that a character is “my stepmom, Janice.” Not every time she’s mentioned, that’s for sure. We get it.
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Maddy
is on page 25 of 288
Author writes teenagers like they’ve never been a teenager before. Too many incorrect uses of the word “like.” Sacrifices good writing and correct grammar for what they think a teenager sounds like.
Also, 5 perspective changes in one (short) chapter is too many.
However, interesting concept and story that has me continuing to read.
— Oct 07, 2026 10:48AM
Also, 5 perspective changes in one (short) chapter is too many.
However, interesting concept and story that has me continuing to read.