Kylie’s Reviews > The Hidden > Status Update

I’m glad that’s finished. It got worse as it went on. It was quite annoyingly written but I did like the plot. I didn’t hate it but I won’t try more and I couldn’t recommend it.

The style of writing has changed. There’s still the same annoying short sentences and over use of people’s names but it’s now more bantering and comedic comments. It’s all a bit weird overall.

A lot of threads and it’s not tying together quickly. Also the short sentences and constant use of a persons name is pretty annoying. And I didn’t need a 2 page description of a character rolling a joint - it was more like an instruction manual.

People don’t really use someone’s name constantly when talking to them. It sounds bloody weird.

Dozens of characters. Phew! Also mr brown writes in short sentences. Lot of them. Gets annoying. Plot is good so far. Quick read and I like the narrator. It’s the author. See what I mean??