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Kylie
is 90% done
The style of writing has changed. There’s still the same annoying short sentences and over use of people’s names but it’s now more bantering and comedic comments. It’s all a bit weird overall.
— Oct 10, 2026 06:07PM
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Kylie
is 99% done
I’m glad that’s finished. It got worse as it went on. It was quite annoyingly written but I did like the plot. I didn’t hate it but I won’t try more and I couldn’t recommend it.
— Oct 10, 2026 06:40PM
Kylie
is 76% done
A lot of threads and it’s not tying together quickly. Also the short sentences and constant use of a persons name is pretty annoying. And I didn’t need a 2 page description of a character rolling a joint - it was more like an instruction manual.
— Oct 10, 2026 06:09AM
Kylie
is 42% done
People don’t really use someone’s name constantly when talking to them. It sounds bloody weird.
— Oct 09, 2026 12:39AM
Kylie
is 28% done
Dozens of characters. Phew! Also mr brown writes in short sentences. Lot of them. Gets annoying. Plot is good so far. Quick read and I like the narrator. It’s the author. See what I mean??
— Oct 08, 2026 05:25PM
Kylie
is 11% done
Wow so many characters introduced in rapid succession. Think I need to note them all down.
— Oct 08, 2026 03:29PM