Mel (Epic Reading)’s Reviews > The Iron Hex > Status Update

It’s too bad this feels like younger writing than it should. The magic setup is interesting enough and the plot is fine (if a bit trope-y but what isn’t in fantasy). I’m still just finding the level of language to be a bit too simple… if that makes sense

I can see why many folks felt this read like YA/teen. Even the sex scene seems a little toned down…

Alright… so now that I guessed the two major reveals correctly… what are we gonna do for the next half of the book?!
lol.

I’ve got a theory it might be bunnies… (I have a theory… and it made me think of Buffy but not vampires, lol)

Really like the swapping POVs. Tried the audio and good narrator.
Prefer our knight and amnesiac gal’s storyline so far. But Rhoda’s will come around I’m sure.

Dual POV. Let’s see where this goes