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Euwhhh don't think I like that it's a bit too... imaginative.... for me

The sandwiches were for her? Oh this small child

Ok, I see what's going on. My bad. But I still think this could have been tackled much better. Bad start. Hopefully it improves.

WHO THE FREAK IS MORELAND?
Please — I want c o n t e x t

Who the heck is Serena?? Why do we keep mentioning her?

You see... I never learn my lesson. I should be reading the synopses of books instead of blindly following what Goodreads recommends me. It is clear that Ali Hazelwood is a fanfic writer. Love her for that — but the problem here is that this is not a pre-established world?? You can't just throw me right into the middle of this without context like you would for some fic. I like background and details plz.

Oh god. I'm giving you another chance Ali Hazelwood I know you have potential.