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This book while part of a series, heavily relies on information from the other books, I feel.
Like a lot.
Also I'm not really a fan of the time jumps DURING the development of the relationship. First Kiss, done and then it's the next day. First orgasm of Levis with Jalon? Skipped.
It's a LOT of Tell and not Show.
Dunno. Don't like it... Kind of pausing this I guess.
— Oct 12, 2026 12:55AM
Like a lot.
Also I'm not really a fan of the time jumps DURING the development of the relationship. First Kiss, done and then it's the next day. First orgasm of Levis with Jalon? Skipped.
It's a LOT of Tell and not Show.
Dunno. Don't like it... Kind of pausing this I guess.
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