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Lani
is 16% done
Ugh. That whole, long chapter was the MC describing every room in the house, even the ones she just looked at on her way past. Slow, and completely unnecessary. Get to the good stuff already!
— Jun 16, 2017 03:18PM
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Lani
is 34% done
'He was halfway in love with her'. Ugh. I feel like this book started in the wrong spot. This couple has had exactly one scene together. One. And now he's halfway in love with her? It's not instalove, they've known each other 2 years but we've been shown none of that. Just told a whole lot of back story. I wish this story had started two years earlier when they first met.
— Jun 20, 2017 03:56AM
Lani
is 12% done
There's an awful lot of 'tell' happening in the beginning of this book. We're obviously being dumped in the middle of a story, and these characters already have a history with each other. It's a bit of a back story info dump. I can't help wishing we'd gotten to 'see' some of these things we're being 'told' about cos they sound really interesting!
— Jun 16, 2017 06:19AM
Lani
is 2% done
Prologue has me hooked! First line had me hooked actually! Great beginning, hope the rest is just as amazing 😊
— Jun 11, 2017 02:52PM

