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So far I don’t like it. The setting is cute and I like the feeling that there is a sort of found family element (which I’m hoping will be developed better as the story progresses) but I dislike the narrative voices of both MCs.
I want to give it a proper shot and it does have elements that could be fun, so fingers crossed it gets better
— Oct 18, 2026 02:00AM
I want to give it a proper shot and it does have elements that could be fun, so fingers crossed it gets better
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Elisa
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The characters’s behavior is even more ridiculous than the insta-love. Their behavior is immature and erratic. This reads more like a really young YA than an adult romance, and not a good one at that. Pity because the setting could have been charming.
— Oct 18, 2026 09:47PM

