Shannon’s Reviews > Incidents Around the House > Status Update

Okay here comes my first big piece of criticism: this narrator is supposed to be 8 years old, but boy is she written like a 4 or 5 year old. Her vocabulary, her understanding of events around her...it's entirely incongruous. Just now, she looked into the bathroom mirror and thought "I look more like a big girl now." Eight-year-olds do not think like that.