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Raphael Roache
is on page 335 of 567
there's a good reason why i'm not a writer. the story did not need to progress any differently, it's really good as is
— Oct 22, 2026 05:42AM
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Raphael Roache
is on page 126 of 567
it's good so far, but the fl keeps mentioning to her past "history" w/ the ml, and I keep thinking that maybe the book should've started further back in the plot to show and not tell. and that is probably going to happen in like two chapters now that i've written this
— Oct 21, 2026 05:06AM
Raphael Roache
is on page 39 of 567
i don't normally think much about prose when i'm reading, but i'm liking the prose in this so far
— Oct 20, 2026 04:15AM