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‘“I accept,” Finn whispered, his voice unnaturally loud.’
Excuse me, what? What does that even mean? For a novella, this feels like such a slog.
— Oct 22, 2026 10:54AM
Excuse me, what? What does that even mean? For a novella, this feels like such a slog.
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wineomatic
is 67% done
“The priest twisted in the air, still twisted by spasms.” This needed an editing pass IMO.
— Oct 22, 2026 12:30PM
wineomatic
is 34% done
During the action scenes there were so many “like a” similes that it created the sensation of speed bumps. I’m not anti-simile, but seeing multiple “like a” during a single scene gives me prose fatigue.
— Oct 22, 2026 10:17AM