William’s Reviews > Soul's Blood > Status Update
William
is 70% done
.... major plot stupidity here. Author’ disrespect of his characters and his readers
— Jun 22, 2017 04:27PM
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William
is 68% done
... uneven pacing, sophomoric plotting. * sighs * Well, he’s not actually a first time author, so no excuse
— Jun 22, 2017 11:18AM
William
is 42% done
... very nice ...
“There is man named Giri who is waiting for me in Sotari. He is my…” She paused, searching for words to describe a concept that she had no words for. “The closest words that describe it that I can think of is Soul’s Blood. He is my partner, my mate, the nourishment that gives me life. The person who fills the emptiness that hadn’t existed until it was filled.”
— Jun 21, 2017 12:39PM
“There is man named Giri who is waiting for me in Sotari. He is my…” She paused, searching for words to describe a concept that she had no words for. “The closest words that describe it that I can think of is Soul’s Blood. He is my partner, my mate, the nourishment that gives me life. The person who fills the emptiness that hadn’t existed until it was filled.”
William
is 22% done
... the writing has improved, and the AI spaceship has added a new note, rounding out the family.
— Jun 21, 2017 06:12AM
William
is 12% done
... inventive, contemporary, good pacing, but sophomoric writing so far. It is the author’s first book though
— Jun 20, 2017 11:17PM

