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it’s kicking offfff. Jocelyn (the lawyer) has just blown up a bunker filled with (basically) ex-military mercenaries

let jocelyn catch a fucking break man

gideon and joss have just met (ooh la la) and the killer knows joss hasn’t died

they tried to get my good sis jocelyn, shall i get madddd

oi belden you bastard, why aren’t you dead

oh… man down

So many moving parts. Martini is getting away with murder! Interesting events are happening in quick succession — Chenko and Chaney escape prison, Jocelyn and Belden fly in for the court hearing (and you know he’s going to be killed before it happens), new side character has been introduced (Buck) and he’s part of this big ass scheme… He’s not moving me, but he’s improving

I see where this is going… I’m loosely interested. Still, writing sucks asssssss

first, actually gripping, pov. scott and kirsten, i was glued to ur two minutes of screen time together.