Jo * Smut-Dickted *’s Reviews > Arrows Through Archer > Status Update
Jo * Smut-Dickted *
is 24% done
I am having a hard time w/abrupt shifts in action. There is no break and then the next paragraph totally different scene. Is this just my copy of the book? I keep having to go back and re read to make sure I'm not missing anything....it's not enjoyable to me.
— Jun 23, 2017 11:11AM
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