Lit Reader’s Reviews > Shadows of Rosings Park — Part 3: Dark Steamy Pride and Prejudice Variation > Status Update
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The first volume had potential (part 1); the second volume had a drastic decline in tone/coherence; and this last third part has decidedly gone downhill !
Formulaic phrases, depressing dreamlike tone, over-use of literary figures that make no sense — many AI red flags to be found (characters to illogical things for illogical motives, formulaic phrases inserting unnecessary poetic flair, depressing tone)
— Oct 26, 2026 07:59AM
Formulaic phrases, depressing dreamlike tone, over-use of literary figures that make no sense — many AI red flags to be found (characters to illogical things for illogical motives, formulaic phrases inserting unnecessary poetic flair, depressing tone)
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is 70% done
This type of literary device is precisely what makes me raise an eyebrow (red flag) >> objects and rooms taking on animated characteristics, thoughts or actions.
“A chair could declare as much importance as its occupant wished. It could not answer a question.”
— Oct 26, 2026 09:13AM
“A chair could declare as much importance as its occupant wished. It could not answer a question.”