Yanik’s Reviews > Neferata: Blood of Nagash > Status Update
Yanik
is on page 40 of 416
Excellent start, liking the writing style, action sequences feel good!
3 different timelines feels a bit too convoluted, and I'm not sure how long the references to things yet to happen past timelines will stay their welcome, but it can be a cool narrative structure when applied well.
Also, hell yeah, Mourkain.
— Oct 27, 2026 11:57AM
3 different timelines feels a bit too convoluted, and I'm not sure how long the references to things yet to happen past timelines will stay their welcome, but it can be a cool narrative structure when applied well.
Also, hell yeah, Mourkain.
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Yanik
is on page 99 of 416
I'm liking it, but there doesn't seem to be a whole lot of room for non-big name characters to breathe. Besides Neferata's handmaidens (which are cool) it's all been huge name Vamps taking up space and making the world feel very small.
There is no need for that, I hope we get more time to let things develop more naturally, but with 3 timelines being narrated page space will be at a premium.
— Nov 01, 2026 06:07AM
There is no need for that, I hope we get more time to let things develop more naturally, but with 3 timelines being narrated page space will be at a premium.