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Beth
is on page 157 of 384
+10 points for the author including accurate jargon for the British vs. American characters (too many authors get it wrong).
-50 points for how many times Kevin calls Karena 'Laredo'. Enough already, ok? Nobody talks like that, inserting a nickname into every other sentence. ugh.
— Jun 24, 2017 09:09PM
-50 points for how many times Kevin calls Karena 'Laredo'. Enough already, ok? Nobody talks like that, inserting a nickname into every other sentence. ugh.
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Beth
is on page 33 of 384
The main character is "on standby" at the Wichita KS airport, to fly to Oklahoma City OK. Umm, first of all, no airline flies between those 2 cities without first connecting in some airport in another state. Second of all, it's only a 2.5 hour drive between the cities. Can we be more realistic?
— Jun 22, 2017 09:05PM
